Rebooting a Bad Memory

( In Which I Rant About Stephen Cosgrove's "Catundra" )

Yesterday morning,  I started to think about the kind of story I WOULD have liked to read.     I wasn't sure where it was going to go, but I typed furiously on my phone (a first for this kind of writing), and before I knew it I had something finished.    I edited a couple of things.      I know of a friend who is looking for a children's story for a project, but at this point I'm not sure this works for anyone but me.

( "Fatty Phoebe" )

ETA:   I'm creating a link to this page for someone not on my friends list, which means I have to unlock it.     If you want your comments not to be publicly visible, please contact me by private message.    Anybody want what they already wrote screened?